Well..
At first watch I was like "uh... whut?" then sudenly realised she was a hot chick and thats generally the reaction hot chicks get from over excited pervs in anime...
He probably should have said something like "stay back you're too hot" or something just to make it a bit clearer.
Either way it made me laugh out loud almost got me busted at work. Was initially disappointed when it ended after just one scene but then realised the awesome potential for a series of shorts.. I envisage a bar room brawl in which one guy flips and destroys the whole building by accident just cos he got angry or something I don't know... But you know your source clearly even after only watching this so im gonna do you a 9+5 in the hope that this gets picked up for more and more shorts like it.
Ignore the low scorers, I'd say they were just expecting something else and rated/reviewed before they'd sat back and thought about it, mainly just reactions to be honest. Keep it up!